Voice and tone principles for in-product copy Style mechanics (capitalization, punctuation, emphasis, formats, emojis) Accessibility, inclusion, and localization Vocabulary and terminology Reusable content patterns and before/after examples Evaluation criteria
Confident but not condescending Intelligent but not erudite Wry and cheeky but never goofy or obnoxious Empathetic rather than emotional Straightforward but not without personality Informative but not rambling Enthusiastic but not bubbly
Vary sentence structure ā Mix short and long sentences; avoid monotonous rhythm. Choose active voice ā āThe dog took the ballā not āThe ball was taken by the dog.ā Simplify ā Cut filler ruthlessly. Kill your darlings. Remove jargon ā When youāre part of an industry, itās easy to forget not everyone understands, or cares about, the jargon you use daily. The best writing is understandable to anyone. No matter the topic, thereās almost always a simpler way to say itāfind it. Think about story ā Even when writing a few sentences, think about the journey youāre taking readers on. Strive to build arcs. Does where you land make sense considering where you took off? Writing toward a bigger picture or story will make your copy easier to digest. Mobile-first content thinking ā Just like mobile-first design, content should also be crafted with small screens in mind. Designing content for smaller screens first encourages removing anything unnecessary, making the experience cleaner, simpler, and easier to navigate.
CPU overheating. Meeting performance has slowed. To ensure a smooth experience, please close any background applications that are not essential for your meeting.
Your computerās working overtime Close unneeded apps to keep your meeting running smoothly.
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Do: use periods at the end of full sentences in banner text, body text, linked text, URLs, errors, dialogs, tooltips, and field labels. -
Donāt: use periods in titles, headers, subtitles, subheaders, bullet points, checkboxes, radio buttons, hint text, or any text that is not a full sentence.
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Do: use ellipses to indicate in-process states, truncate when space is limited, or show that a menu option opens further choices (only when the copy does not include a verb). -
Donāt: use ellipses in tooltips, buttons, hyperlinks, or menu options that take immediate action.
Do: use for possession. Donāt: use for plurality (e.g. āAPIāsā). Contractions are encouraged ā they sound friendly and informal.
Contact info: +xxx-xxx-xxx). Capitalize the word after a colon in a list on a separate line; in running sentences, capitalize only proper nouns after the colon.Do: highlight key points and refer to labels or directions without quotation marks. Donāt: overuse bold or rely on bold alone to convey meaning ā the message must be clear without it.
Support message meaning Set a playful tone Be enjoyable to users
Onboarding New feature or product announcements Successes or accomplishments
Does the situation call for a Spirited tone ā is it uplifting and celebratory? Does the situation limit the use of other expressive brand elements like illustration, icons, or more descriptive writing? Will the clarity and meaning of the message be enhanced with an emoji?
Use emojis in headlines only ā Never in descriptive text or buttons. Place emojis at the end of the headline. Do: Your calendar is completely free š Donāt: š Your calendar is completely free
Donāt use punctuation with emojis ā The emoji is your punctuation. Never use emojis to replace words ā This will make your message inaccessible for everyone. Donāt: Your š is completely free
Use only popular and widely accepted emojis ā Emojis can have multiple meanings depending on culture, region, and age. Examples: š = High-five (in the US) or Prayer (in India); š© = Being silly or sarcastic (in the US) or Good luck (in Japan). See recommended emojis below. Donāt use repeated or multiple emojis ā Using more than one emoji repeatedly can be tedious to people using a screen reader. Donāt: File uploaded ššš (Screen reader: File uploaded clapping hands clapping hands clapping hands)
Use emojis that work in dark and light mode ā Use the default yellow skin tone for people and hands. Do: š Donāt: šš»šš¼šš½šš¾ššæ
Donāt use emojis if another visual element is used ā If there are icons or illustration being used in the same message, donāt use an emoji. Use emojis, never emoticons ā Emojis have built-in alt text descriptions and can be read as text by a screen reader. Emoticons are punctuation and will be read out as punctuation. Do: š Donāt: 8-)
Use en dashes for ranges: 10 AM ā 11 AMNo leading zeros; never spell out standalone numbers Use commas in large numbers: 8,888,000Phone (international): +XX-XXX-XXX-XXXXPhone (US): (XXX) XXX-XXXX
> as the separator.Does this language make sense to someone who doesnāt work here? Can someone quickly scan this and understand the material? If someone canāt see the colors, images, or video, is the message still clear?
Use neutral, precise, relevant descriptions ā include personal qualities only when essential. Choose words carefully; beware of historical significance and appropriation from marginalized communities. Avoid terms that assign value to racial characteristics (e.g. ādark patternā). Color terms like ādark modeā or ālight themeā are acceptable when they refer to brightness, not value. Avoid proxy statements and stereotypes. Communicate from equality and consider worst-case interpretation.
Write short sentences. Avoid unnecessary adverbs and adjectives. Use simple verb tenses and active voice. Prefer common words: Buy over Purchase, Help over Assist, Like over Such as.
Links ā Describe what the link does. This is us For the best experience, download our desktop app. Not us Our desktop app provides the best experience. Learn more.
Front-loading ā Put essential information first. This is us To annotate, tap the pencil icon. Not us Tap the pencil icon to begin annotating.
Directional language ā Avoid location-dependent wording. This is us Select from these options. Not us Select from the options below.
Plain language This is us The password you entered is incorrect. Not us Credentials you provided canāt be determined to be authentic.
Button labels ā Describe the action. This is us Send logs Not us Submit
Logical order This is us Search bar ā Search tips ā Search results Not us Search bar ā Search results ā Search tips
Concise permission copy This is us The app uses ultrasound to pair with nearby devices. Allow access to your microphone? Not us Long technical explanation before the ask.
Form labels before fields This is us Password required ā [Input field] Not us [Input field] ā Password required
Include articles when space allows (a, the, this, that). Write in the active voice. Be careful with words that have multiple meanings (has, right, left). Use descriptive labels and feature names. Use descriptive subjects ā avoid this, it, and that after a specific subject. Donāt rely on idioms, metaphors, slang, humor, cultural references, or uncommon foreign words for critical information. Donāt use unnecessary abbreviations (e.g., e.g., i.e., etc.). Donāt embed text within images. Donāt create sentences that depend on UI element placement. Plan for text expansion ā English often expands 20ā30% in German or Russian.
Instead of saying āNo BLANKā say: āThere arenāt any BLANKā or āYou can find BLANK hereā or something similar. Consider using this moment to play with language or highlight our voice. Like instead of āNo meetingsā say āMeetings freeā or āThe day is yours.ā Use your best judgement.
Format: Verb + noun when the noun adds clarity Case: Sentence case Length: Aim for 25 characters or fewer when possible Examples: Save changes, Create project, Delete, Cancel, Continue, I agree
Format: What happened + what to do next Tone: Crisis moment ā positive, direct, understanding. No exclamation points. Example: You donāt have access to this page. Ask your admin for permission.
Format: Descriptive header + brief purpose or encouragement + optional action Tone: Informative (most) or Timely (occasional). Avoid āNo [thing].ā Example: Spaces ā When you start or join a space, itāll appear here. Spaces are great for collaborating on specific topics or projects.
Title: Name the specific item or action (āDelete Spring Campaignā not āDelete space?ā) Body: State the consequence plainly; use contractions; avoid asking the same question twice Example: Once deleted, all content and history in this space will be gone forever.
Title: Inviting, not commanding (ā[App name] would like to access your cameraā) Body: Benefit-led, warm (āThis is so you can show your smiling face in meetings.ā)
Format: Personal, plain language + optional peppy sign-off Example: Your network strength and CPU are doing great. Enjoy the Studio!
Format: Set honest expectations upfront; acknowledge friction with warmth Example: Connecting %App% to your account may take a few steps ā Depending on the platform, a code might need to be entered multiple times. Usually, itās just once. Donāt worry, weāll guide you through every step.
Tone: Dial up Spirited and Diligent Format: Descriptive headers + benefit-led body + clear next action Examples: āStay close with your teamā, āBe ready before the curtain risesā, āA space for all your magicā
Tone: Dial up always improving and empathetic Format: Explain whatās happening onscreen and what the product is doing to help ā conversational, short, and direct
Tone: Dial up Diligent and empathetic Format: Descriptive headers; explain purpose simply, like to a friend; offer guidance or actions when possible
Brief, instructional tone Use periods on full-sentence tooltips No ellipses in tooltips
Never use: Lorem ipsum, Sample text, Placeholder, TODO copy Write real, on-brand copy that serves the user
- Message alignment ā Matches intended message, context, and goal
- User enablement ā Helps user move to next step or complete a task
- Accuracy ā All facts and logic correct
- Spelling and grammar ā No errors
- Simplicity ā No jargon; simple, clear language
- Voice characteristics ā Spirited (dynamic, subtle humor), Diligent (precise, intentional), Thoughtful (inclusive, empathetic)
- Moment fit ā Tone matches Impression, Crisis, Instructional, or Achievement context
- Accessibility and inclusion ā Plain language, inclusive terms, no directional-only instructions
- Localization readiness ā Active voice, no idioms or unnecessary abbreviations; room for expansion
- Forward momentum ā Always provide a next step; no dead ends
- Style alignment ā Sentence case, correct date/time formats, punctuation rules
- No placeholder copy ā Never Lorem ipsum, Sample text, Placeholder, or TODO copy